Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What motivates you in your workplace aside from your salary?
Motivation in working life other than salary will be the sense of achievement you get when you work hard at what you want to do.
2. What benefits do you think will make employees stay in a company?
The biggest benefit of having employees stay in the company would be a stable life.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
It is indeed the sense of achievement and having a stable life. :) Have a great day!
~Teacher Lucy
Motivation in working life other than salary will be the sense of achievement you get when you work hard at what you want to do.
>>CORRECT!
>>The sense of an achievement when you work is one of the motivations an employee has.
The biggest benefit of having employees stay in the company would be a stable life.
>>CORRECT!
>>A stable life is the biggest benefit of an employee.
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