HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Teacher Selene!^^
I\'m not good in English, but thank you for your compliment.
I just finished homework for today.
Q. Do men or women have more freedom in your country?
Answer:
I\'m not sure about this part.
Korea claims gender equality, but I think there is still discrimination.
Recently, feminists are growing.
Thank you for giving feedback!^^
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Erin!^^
You can improve your English skills by practicing every day. I know you will be good in speaking the English language. You just have to be patient and don\'t rush. About your homework, your translator is better today. ^_^ See you later in our class.
I\'m not sure about this part.
>>>CORRECT!
Korea claims gender equality, but I think there is still discrimination.
Korea claims gender equality, but I think there is still discrimination.
>>> South Korea claims gender equality, but I think there is still discrimination.
Recently, feminists are growing.
Recently, feminists are growing.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Recently, feminism is growing.
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