Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Teacher Lucy
I think the 1965 Korea-Japan agreement is a hasty decision by the Park Chung-hee administration to receive economic aid from Japan.
>>CORRECT!
>>To receive economic aids from Japan, Park Chung-hee\'s administration decided hastily on the 1965 Korea-Japan agreement.
But it is only a matter of compensation among countries.
>>CORRECT!
There is another problem that needs to be solved between the nation and the people.
>>CORRECT!
>>There\'s more problem needed to be solved between nations and the people.
Japan is distorting history by saying that forced labor was done by Koreans themselves.
>>CORRECT!
>>Japan falsifies history that forced labor was done by our ancestors.
Japan is trying to cover up its mistakes.
>>CORRECT!
>>Japan dissimulates their mistakes.
What our people want now is not money, but real forgiveness.
>>CORRECT!
>>We don\'t want money , nevertheless we want a sincere apology.
Not all Japanese are like that.
>>CORRECT!
>>Japanese citizens are not all the same.
Some people apologize with regret.
>>CORRECT!
>>Some people ask forgiveness with regrets.
Japan\'s Abe administration is a shameless government that has no knowledge of its wrongdoings as a country that started World War I.
>>CORRECT!
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