HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Selene*^^*
I am not good at speaking English in class, so you listen as much as you can and write your feedback in English.
I did my homework.
Q. What do you think when you look at yourself in the mirror?
A. When I see myself in the mirror, I think I\'m older and not a bright face.
A bright impression gives the opponent comfort.
So recently it has been cited as the most favored images in communication relationships.
Thank you for reading through~!!(^-^)*
See you next Monday in class~^^
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Erin!^^
You did a great job in doing your homework. I\'m happy to correct your grammar errors. Continue practicing your skills. Have a great evening!^_^
I am not good at speaking English in class, so you listen as much as you can and write your feedback in English.
>>>I am not good at speaking English in class, so listen as much as you can and write your feedback in English.
When I see myself in the mirror, I think I\'m older and not a bright face.
>>> When I see myself in the mirror, I think I\'m older and I don\'t have a bright face.
A bright impression gives the opponent comfort.
>>>A bright impression gives comfort to others.
So recently it has been cited as the most favored images in communication relationships.
>>>So recently, it has been noted as the most favored appearances for communication in relationships.
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