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2019-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: Can you tell me about the hardest decision you have ever made? In my case, The hardest decision is that where am i going to suitable unit during military service. Because It is very different features, It is up to you where are you volunteered. In the other words, If i disposed the main area, maybe i will be protected DMZ area and top of the mountains. Our country could be divided that borders, coasts, mountains area, seas, sky. Second thing is that if i going to university what should i choose about what kind of subject. I think that life can be depended what you chosen it and what you regret it.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

In my case, The hardest decision is that where am i going to suitable unit during military service.
>>In my case, the hardest decision is to think of what suitable unit should I go to during my military service.

Because It is very different features, It is up to you where are you volunteered.
>>Because it is has different features, it is up to you where are you volunteered.

In the other words, If i disposed the main area, maybe i will be protected DMZ area and top of the mountains.
>>In the other words, if I was disposed in the main area, maybe I will be protect DMZ area at the top of the mountains.

Our country could be divided that borders, coasts, mountains area, seas, sky.
>>Our country could be divided by borders, coasts, mountains area, seas, and the sky.

Second thing is that if i going to university what should i choose about what kind of subject.
>>The second thing is that if I go to a university, about what should I choose about what kind of subject.

I think that life can be depended what you chosen it and what you regret it.
>>
I think that it depends on my life. You can be what you have chosen and what whether or not you will regret it.

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