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HOMEWORK: Who is the most annoying celebrity? Why?
I think that Most annoying celebrity is NOEL who is Korean rapper.
It happen began that when he driving his own car on the street, he hit person who riding auto-cycle by his car.
Fortunately, he is fine who is riding auto-cycle, however, surprisingly he drove his car drunk condition.
In Korea, drunk drive is same mean as murder. A couple months ago, It is happened about drunk drive.
So, crucial life was gone to sky, according to this happened, We made some laws to protected the drunk drive happening.
Pass the time, drunk drive laws will be more strong than before, We have to follow these rules very strictly.
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I think that Most annoying celebrity is NOEL who is Korean rapper.
>>I think that most annoying celebrity is NOEL who is a Korean rapper.
>>It happened when he was driving his own car on the street, he hit person who is riding an auto-cycle by his car.
Fortunately, he is fine who is riding auto-cycle, however, surprisingly he drove his car drunk condition.
>>Fortunately, the person who is riding the auto-cycle is fine, however, surprisingly he drove his car in a drunk condition.
In Korea, drunk drive is same mean as murder. A couple months ago, It is happened about drunk drive.
>>In Korea, drunk driving is the same as murder. A couple months ago, it is about drunk driving.
So, crucial life was gone to sky, according to this happened, We made some laws to protected the drunk drive happening.
>>So, crucial life was gone to sky, according to what happened, we made some laws to protect the drunk driver.
Pass the time, drunk drive laws will be more strong than before, We have to follow these rules very strictly.
>>Drunk driving laws will be stronger than before, we have to follow these rules very strictly.
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