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2019-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Please answer any of the following questions below: 1. What is the most interesting tourist attraction you’ve travelled to in your own country? The tourist attraction in Korea is Jeju Island. I have been to Jeju island five times. Every time I went, I liked it with a different feeling. 2. What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them? I will not visit a warring country like Afghanistan.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [Name]!

~Teacher Lucy

The tourist attraction in Korea is Jeju Island.

>>One of the tourist attractions in Korea is Jeju Island.

I have been to Jeju island five times.

>>CORRECT!

Every time I went, I liked it with a different feeling.

>>CORRECT!

>>Every time I go, I like it with a different feeling.

I will not visit a warring country like Afghanistan.

>>CORRECT!

>>I would never visit a warring country like Afghanistan.

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