Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is there any language which you don\'t presently speak but which you would like to learn? Why does this language interest you?
I don\'t use chinese, but I am interested in learng chinese.In my previeous company, Chinese company acqiured our company, So Chinese poeple often visited our company and we worked with them. I couldn\'t understand what Chiness letter means on working, so I requested them to traslate in English. In addition, China is very close to Korea and very important to us economically.
In that reason, I have tired to learn Chines for 3 monthes. It was interesting but I didn\'t keep learning Chinese anylonger.
To learn new language, I think that patience is very important. If I master English, I\'ll try to learn Chines again.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. ^_^ Once again, I appreciate you doing your homework. Well done! I hope we could have a chance to talk about it in class. Have a good one! ~teacher Jane
Is there any language which you don\'t presently speak but which you would like to learn? Why does this language interest you?
I don\'t use chinese, but I am interested in learng chinese.
>>> I don\'t use Chinese but I am interested in learning Chinese.
In my previeous company, Chinese company acqiured our company, So Chinese poeple often visited our company and we worked with them.
>>> In my previous company, a Chinese company acquired our company so Chinese people often visited our company and we worked with them.
I couldn\'t understand what Chiness letter means on working, so I requested them to traslate in English.
>>> I couldn\'t understand what Chinese characters at work mean so I requested them to translate in English.
In addition, China is very close to Korea and very important to us economically.
>>> In addition, China is very close to Korea and it is very important to us economically.
In that reason, I have tired to learn Chines for 3 monthes.
>>> For that reason, I have tried to learn Chinese for 3 months.
It was interesting but I didn\'t keep learning Chinese anylonger.
>>> It was interesting but I didn\'t keep learning Chinese any longer.
To learn new language, I think that patience is very important.
>>> To learn a new language, I think that patience is very important.
If I master English, I\'ll try to learn Chines again.
>>> If I master English, I\'ll try to learn Chinese again.
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