Homework~!
학생이 쓴 원문
One of the my precious things is my cell phone.
Of course, I can\'t live without this.
My daily routine is as follow.
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1. I wake up in the morning with my cell phone alarm .
2. I check my schedule in my cell phone memo.
3. Sometimes when i meet my friends, i take a picture and share my daily life looking at the pictures i took.
4. I check my daughters\'s school notices and homework with my cell phone.
5. When I study English, i use my cell phone to find word that i don\'t know.
6. When I feel unhappy, i listen to music with my cell phone.
7. Through my cell phone, I can shopping that i need things
8.The last, i can\'t study english with teacher Jedah*^^*
Did these explain why i can\'t without my cellphone?
강사 첨삭
Hi Jessica! Thank you so much for sharing. I appreciate it a lot. I think most people would say that they can not live with either their cellphones or the internet! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
One of the my precious things is my cell phone.
>>One of the precious things I have is my cellphone.
Of course, I can\'t live without this.
>>CORRECT
My daily routine is as follow.
>>My daily routine is as follows:
ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ
1. I wake up in the morning with my cell phone alarm .
>>One of the precious things I have is my cellphone.
Of course, I can\'t live without this.
>>CORRECT
My daily routine is as follow.
>>My daily routine is as follows:
ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ
1. I wake up in the morning with my cell phone alarm .
>>CORRECT
2. I check my schedule in my cell phone memo.
2. I check my schedule in my cell phone memo.
>>CORRECT
3. Sometimes when i meet my friends, i take a picture and share my daily life looking at the pictures i took.
3. Sometimes when i meet my friends, i take a picture and share my daily life looking at the pictures i took.
>>CORRECT (don\'t forget to capitalize your \"I\")
4. I check my daughters\'s school notices and homework with my cell phone.
>>CORRECT
5. When I study English, i use my cell phone to find word that i don\'t know.
>>CORRECT (don\'t forget to capitalize your \"I\")
6. When I feel unhappy, i listen to music with my cell phone.
6. When I feel unhappy, i listen to music with my cell phone.
>>CORRECT (don\'t forget to capitalize your \"I\")
7. Through my cell phone, I can shopping that i need things
7. Through my cell phone, I can shopping that i need things
>>Through my cellphone, I can shop for the things I need.
8.The last, i can\'t study english with teacher Jedah*^^*
>>The last one is, I can\'t study English with Teacher Jedah without my cellphone.
Did these explain why i can\'t without my cellphone?
8.The last, i can\'t study english with teacher Jedah*^^*
>>The last one is, I can\'t study English with Teacher Jedah without my cellphone.
Did these explain why i can\'t without my cellphone?
>>Did this explain why i can\'t live without my cellphone?
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