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2019-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I`ve been Ulaanbaatar, the capital city of Mongolia in 2016. I`ve been there for veterinary volunteering with my college professors and students. We visited some places such as animal hospital of Ulaanbataar university, largest farm in Mongolia. After volunteering schedule, we went to the mountain, which was as deep as the lights from cities never get reached. Our camping places were surrounded by rocks, woods and sounds of little crickets. After sunset, the tons of stars were glowing. When I thought about the images of natural landscapes, these images are imerged first.

강사 첨삭

Good day!

Thank you for doing your homework!

You are lucky to have visited an amazing place.

I hope I would be able to visit this someday too. :)


I`ve been Ulaanbaatar, the capital city of Mongolia in 2016.
>>I\'ve been to Ulaanbaatar, the capital of Mongolia in 2016.
I`ve been there for veterinary volunteering with my college professors and students.
>>I\'ve been there to render veterinary service as a volunteer with my professors and other students.
We visited some places such as animal hospital of Ulaanbataar university, largest farm in Mongolia.
>>We visited places like the Animal Hospital of Ulaanbaatar University, the largest farm in Mongolia.
After volunteering schedule, we went to the mountain, which was as deep as the lights from cities never get reached.
>>After volunteering, we went to a deep mountain that never reached the light from the city.
Our camping places were surrounded by rocks, woods and sounds of little crickets.
>>Our camping site was surrounded by rocks, forests, and small crickets.
After sunset, the tons of stars were glowing.
>>After sunset, a lot of stars were shining.
When I thought about the images of natural landscapes, these images are imerged first.
>>When I think of images of natural scenery, these images are the first to come in my mind.

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