Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you miss most about your hometown? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
My hometown is calm and peaceful small town.
A big old tree aged 250years is the center of town and water stream accrossed of the town.
Mountain is around the town and there are fiends with plants in the town.
My parents plant various vegetable and fruits. they are rice, red pepper, potato and so one.
I often miss my parents, foods which my mom cook and smell of my home town.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. I\'m happy to know more about your hometown through your homework. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the topic. I appreciate it very much. Have a great time with your family in your hometown. Tell me about it when you get back. ~ teacher Jane ^^
What do you miss most about your hometown? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
My hometown is calm and peaceful small town.
>>> My hometown is a calm and peaceful small town.
A big old tree aged 250years is the center of town and water stream accrossed of the town.
>>> A big old tree aged 250 years is in the center of town there is a stream across town.
Mountain is around the town and there are fiends with plants in the town.
>>> A mountain surrounds the town and there are fields with plants in the town.
My parents plant various vegetable and fruits.
>>> My parents plant various vegetables and fruits.
they are rice, red pepper, potato and so one.
>>> They are rice, red pepper, potato, and so on.
I often miss my parents, foods which my mom cook and smell of my home town.
>>> I often miss my parents, meals which my mom cooks and the smell of my hometown.
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