Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please answer any of the following questions below:
1. Do you agree that we develop an emotional connection to our phones - that it\'s no longer just a device, but a companion?
I agree that we are companions to develop an emotional connection.
2. How much time do you spend using your smartphone?
My eyes get tired easily. That\'s why I can\'t see my smartphone for a long time. I use a smart phone only when I need it.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Teacher Lucy
I agree that we are companions to develop an emotional connection.
>>I agree that we develop an emotional connection to our phones and it\'s already our companion in our daily lives.
My eyes get tired easily.
>>CORRECT!
>>My eyes are drooping easily.
>>My eyes droop easily.
That\'s why I can\'t see my smartphone for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
>>That\'s why I can\'t use my smartphone for a long time.
I use a smart phone only when I need it.
>>CORRECT!
>>I only use my smartphone when I need it.
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