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What are the most common shops that you can find around your area?
Ilsan city that I am living is not production city but consumption city. That\'s why Ilsan city has lots of department stores, big supermarkets, and shopping centers. In addition my apartment building consists of a shopping center on the third floor including supermarket, clothes stores, food courts, and so on.
So I am going where I want to go that day.
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Hello Bella,
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Teacher Annie (^^)
Question: What are the most common shops that you can find around your area?
Ilsan city that I am living is not production city but consumption city.
>>>Ilsan city where I am living is a consumption city not a production one.
That\'s why Ilsan city has lots of department stores, big supermarkets, and shopping centers.
>>>That is why Ilsan city has a lot of department stores, big supermarkets, and shopping centers.
In addition my apartment building consists of a shopping center on the third floor including supermarket, clothes stores, food courts, and so on.
>>>CORRECT
OR: In addition my apartment building has a shopping center located on the third floor which includes a supermarket, clothes stores, food courts, and so on.
So I am going where I want to go that day.
>>>That is why I can easily go there and buy whatever I need and anytime that I want to.
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