Homework~!

2019-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Right~! AS I get older, my tastes changed. When I was young, I didn\'t like Korea traditional food like [이름]-chi stew, bean paste stew, Cheonggukjang and so on...... But now, I cook these food every day. Of course I eat well~*^^* It has no reasons. Whenever I ate [이름]-chi stew rather than fast food, I felt inner comfort. I told my husband what I thought. He said \"Me, too.\"*^^* so I cook Korea food he likes every day. But my two daughters dislike I made Korea food. But I\'m okay. Maybe as they get older, they will change like me and my husband.~~~*^^*

강사 첨삭

Awesome thoughts on this one Jessica! ^ ^ Thank you for sharing. ^ ^

I have to agree with you. As people grow older, their preferences and tastes change a lot! I used to hate eating bitter gourd when I was young. I would always puke every time my mother would force me to eat it. But these days, no matter how bitter it is, I really like it especially when mixed with eggs! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

Right~! AS I get older, my tastes changed.
>>As I grew older, my taste for food has changed.
When I was young, I didn\'t like Korea traditional food like [이름]-chi stew, bean paste stew, Cheonggukjang and so on......
>>When I was young, I didn\'t like Korean traditional food like [이름]-chi stew, bean paste stew, Cheonggukjang and so on......
But now, I cook these food every day. Of course I eat well~*^^*
>>CORRECT
It has no reasons.
>>CORRECT
Whenever I ate [이름]-chi stew rather than fast food, I felt inner comfort.
>>Whenever I eat home cooked [이름]-chi stew, I feel an inner comfort.
I told my husband what I thought.
>>CORRECT
He said \"Me, too.\"*^^*
>>CORRECT or

>>He had the same feeling too!

so I cook Korea food he likes every day.
>>So I cook the Korean dishes he likes everyday.
But my two daughters dislike I made Korea food.
>>But my two daughters dislike the Korean food that I make.
But I\'m okay.
>>CORRECT
Maybe as they get older, they will change like me and my husband.~~~*^^*

>>CORRECT

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