homework
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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: What do you do if someone grabs your purse or backpack?
First, i will be catch someone after that i call the police and convey the thief.
If the thief running away, I will chase and find out where thief go away.
Stealing is very big mistake and It couldn\'t be return.
I think that thief who had career for their profit, that could be more remain their cri[이름]al records.
So, It will be better that not using backpack but also using hip bag.
Because If i use backpack, it is so easy to open it behind me.
And, I recommend that just having less amount of money and simple thing.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
>>First, I will catch someone after that I will call the police and convey it to the thief.
If the thief running away, I will chase and find out where thief go away.
>>If the thief will run away, I will chase and find out where the thief went.
Stealing is very big mistake and It couldn\'t be return.
>>Stealing is a very big mistake and it couldn\'t be return.
I think that thief who had career for their profit, that could be more remain their cri[이름]al records.
>>I think that a thief who had that career for their profit would be a cri[이름]al for the rest of their lives.
So, It will be better that not using backpack but also using hip bag.
>>So, it will be better if we do not use a backpack but also using a hip bag.
Because If i use backpack, it is so easy to open it behind me.
>>Because if I use a backpack, it is so easy to open it behind me.
And, I recommend that just having less amount of money and simple thing.
>>And, I will recommend that just having a few money with them as simple as that.
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