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2019-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Please answer any of the following questions below: 1. “Time is money.” Do you agree or disagree? Why? \"Time is money.\" I agree with that. Because I can make money if I spend time on something that makes money. 2. How do you feel about the time that is wasted? I think we should save time. I don\'t feel good when I waste time. But I think we should also rest well. Rest cannot be a waste of time. I don\'t think making money is the only thing that saves time.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [Name]!

Absolutely! We should rest, earn and play. It has something to do with balancing. :)

~Teacher Lucy

\"Time is money.\"

>>CORRECT!

I agree with that.

>>CORRECT!

>>I agree with it.

Because I can make money if I spend time on something that makes money.

>>CORRECT!

>>If I spend on something that will compensate me then I will make money.

I think we should save time.

>>CORRECT!

I don\'t feel good when I waste time.

>>CORRECT!

>>I don\'t feel good when time is wasted.

But I think we should also rest well.

>>CORRECT!

Rest cannot be a waste of time.

>>CORRECT!

>>Taking a rest is not a waste of time.

I don\'t think making money is the only thing that saves time.

>>CORRECT!

>>Money is not the only thing that saves time.

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