Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Who did you most admire as a child? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
When I was a child, I admired a painter.
At that time, I was drawing and painting something. So, I thought that I would be a painter.
As I grow up more and more, I knew that painter can\'t earn the money.
So, my dream was changed.
강사 첨삭
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When I was a child, I admired a painter.
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At that time, I was drawing and painting something.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR>>> At that time, I liked/ I was interested in drawing and painting.
So, I thought that I would be a painter.
>>> CORRECT =)
As I grow up more and more, I knew that painter can\'t earn the money.
>>> As I grew up, I realized that painters do not earn much money.
So, my dream was changed.
>>> So my dream changed.
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