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2019-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: What two things could you not do when you were a child, but you can do now? When i was child, I be able to PC room until 10 PM, because it have a law about teenager law So, if time turn 10 PM, I have to go home, but now I could use PC room everyday. But, time was passing, I don\'t like that anymore because too boring and It will be better doing exercise or hanging out with my friends. Second thing is that i can drink some beer or alcohol. Honestly, many people had experienced that drinking before adult. Same as me, I did that, but i can not drink much because If i drink too much i feel very dizzy.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

When i was child, I be able to PC room until 10 PM, because it have a law about teenager law

>>When I was a child, I would be able to go to the PC room until 10 PM, because I have a law about teenager law.

So, if time turn 10 PM, I have to go home, but now I could use PC room everyday.

>>So, if it\'s 10 P.M, I have to go home, but now I could use the PC room everyday.

But, time was passing, I don\'t like that anymore because too boring and It will be better doing exercise or hanging out with my friends.

>>But, as time passes by, I don\'t like that anymore because it\'s too boring and it will be better to do some exercise or hanging out with my friends.

Second thing is that i can drink some beer or alcohol.

>>The second thing is that I can drink some beer or alcohol.

Honestly, many people had experienced that drinking before adult.

>>Honestly, many people had experienced drinking before adulthood.

Same as me, I did that, but i can not drink much because If i drink too much i feel very dizzy.

>>I did that too, but I cannot drink much because if I drink too much I will feel very dizzy.

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