Homework~!
학생이 쓴 원문
It may sound funny~~^^*
I am looking forward to invent the robert.
Of coures, the robot exist now. But it isn\'t used at home.
I want the own robot. If it come out, i will buy immediately.
The robot that i desire
1. When i come back grocery store, it cook food that i want.
2. After eating, it washes the dishes.
3. While my out, it cleans my house brightly.
4. After wash my family\'s clothes, it arranges our clothes.
There are many other things that robot need to do. But it would be nice to do just this.
I am looking forward to come day that i desire~*^^*
강사 첨삭
Hi Jessica! ^ ^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. ^ ^ I appreciate it a lot! ^^
I think this is something that most women especially housewives look forward to in the future. A \"robot\" help. A robot that can do almost everything! It would really be great! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
I am looking forward to invent the robert.
>>I am looking forward to inventing a robot.
Of coures, the robot exist now.
Of coures, the robot exist now.
>>Of course, robots are everywhere.
>>We can see robots everywhere.
But it isn\'t used at home.
>>CORRECT
I want the own robot.
I want the own robot.
>>I want my own robot.
If it come out, i will buy immediately.
>>If it will be out in the market, I would immediately buy one.
The robot that i desire
>>CORRECT (Don\'t forget to capitalize \"I\" and your period at the end of your sentence.)
The robot that i desire
>>CORRECT (Don\'t forget to capitalize \"I\" and your period at the end of your sentence.)
>>These are the things I want my robot to do or is capable of doing:
1. When i come back grocery store, it cook food that i want.
1. When i come back grocery store, it cook food that i want.
>>When I come back from the grocery store, it cooks the food that I want.
2. After eating, it washes the dishes.
2. After eating, it washes the dishes.
>>CORRECT
3. While my out, it cleans my house brightly.
3. While my out, it cleans my house brightly.
>>While I\'m out, it cleans the house well and immaculately.
4. After wash my family\'s clothes, it arranges our clothes.
>>After washing our clothes, it would arrange our clothes/fix our clothes.
There are many other things that robot need to do.
4. After wash my family\'s clothes, it arranges our clothes.
>>After washing our clothes, it would arrange our clothes/fix our clothes.
There are many other things that robot need to do.
>>There are many other things that this robot needs to do.
But it would be nice to do just this.
>>But it would be nice if it can do the things listed above.
I am looking forward to come day that i desire~*^^*
I am looking forward to come day that i desire~*^^*
>>I am looking forward for that desire to come true one day.
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