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2019-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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1. what do you like most about yourself? -> I\'m an early bird. I think it is my strength to get up early in the morning to exercise and start the day with a refreshing mood. 2.How do you keep yourself organized? ->Since retirement, I have been the first to focus on health care, so I continue to cycle and play badminton every day. I am also preparing to live a second life, and in that way I am preparing for overseas volunteer work through koica. 3.Would you be willing to work nights and weekends? ->I used to work many nights and weekends in my past workplace. The reason was because I was the leader of the organization and was responsible. I\'m an early bird, so I want to start the day early in the morning and get off quickly. Of course, sometimes I have to work overtime if I have urgent work.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your work early. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

1. what do you like most about yourself?
-> I\'m an early bird. I think it is my strength to get up early in the morning to exercise and start the day with a refreshing mood.
>>CORRECT!
2.How do you keep yourself organized?
->Since retirement, I have been the first to focus on health care, so I continue to cycle and play badminton every day. I am also preparing to live a second life, and in that way I am preparing for overseas volunteer work through koica.
>>Since retirement, I have been the first to focus on health care, so I continue to cycle and play badminton every day. I am also preparing to live a second life so I am preparing for overseas volunteer work through koica.
3.Would you be willing to work nights and weekends?
->I used to work many nights and weekends in my past workplace. The reason was because I was the leader of the organization and was responsible. I\'m an early bird, so I want to start the day early in the morning and get off quickly. Of course, sometimes I have to work overtime if I have urgent work.
>>I used to work many nights and weekends in my past workplace. The reason was because I was the leader of the organization and was responsible. I\'m an early bird, so I want to start the day early in the morning and get off work quickly. Of course, sometimes I have to work overtime if I have urgent work.

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