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2019-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. When was the last time you went to the bank? What did you do there? The last time I went to the bank was two months ago. I made a credit card there. The bank wanted me to visit to check my identity. It was anoying but I had to go there. Nowadays, it is very simple to make a credit card. I just need to type my details through online. On the ohter side, I\'m doubt safety.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [이름]!

I totally agree with you, Ms. [이름]. It\'s easier to apply online though there\'s a danger when it comes to safety. :) Have a great day!

~Teacher Lucy

The last time I went to the bank was two months ago.

>>CORRECT!

>>I went to the bank two months ago.

I made a credit card there.

>>I applied for a credit card.

The bank wanted me to visit to check my identity.

>>CORRECT!

>>The band requires me to visit and check my identity.

It was annoying but I had to go there.

>>CORRECT!

>>I need to go though it\'s annoying.

Nowadays, it is very simple to make a credit card.

>>Nowadays, it is very simple to apply for a credit card.

I just need to type my details through online.

>>CORRECT!

>>I just need to input my information online.

On the other side, I\'m doubt safety.

>>On the other hand, I doubt its safety.

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