Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the questions below.
1. When was the last time you went to the bank? What did you do there?
I went to the bank last February to exchange money to go to America.
2. What do you think about online banking? Do you think online banking is always safe? Why? Or why not?
I don\'t think online banking is always safe.
But I\'ve been using it for the last 20 years, believing and using it because there\'s been nothing particularly bad.
3. Do you want to make a deal at the bank? Or would you like to use internet/online banking?
I go only when I really need to go to the bank and I usually use online banking.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Teacher Lucy
I went to the bank last February to exchange money to go to America.
>>CORRECT!
>>Last February, I went to the bank to exchange money to use in America.
I don\'t think online banking is always safe.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'m not pretty sure that online banking is safe.
But I\'ve been using it for the last 20 years, believing and using it because there\'s been nothing particularly bad.
>>CORRECT!
I go only when I really need to go to the bank and I usually use online banking.
>>I only go when I really need to go to the bank and I usually use online banking.
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