Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Can you think of any books you would recommend to another person? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
The title of the book is \"Kim Ji Yuong who was born in 1982\"
I recommend the book to my husbund. Also I upload my review to my SNS.
I recommend the book because it makes people understand the life of female in Korea.
I agreed with the story of the book because I am same age with Kim Ji Young in the book.
And Kim Ji Yiung is the most common [이름]e in that time.
So, the book show that female are still not same position with male through the life of female in that time,
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. I\'m glad to hear from you today. I hope you enjoyed your holiday with your sisters. Again, thank you for your homework. Excellently done and I hope we get the chance to talk about it in class. Have a good one. See you tomorrow. ~ teacher Jane ^___^
The title of the book is \"Kim Ji Yuong who was born in 1982\"
>>> The title of the book is \"Kim Ji Yuong who was born in 1982.\"
I recommend the book to my husbund.
>>> I recommended the book to my husband.
Also I upload my review to my SNS.
>>> Also, I uploaded my review to my SNS.
I recommend the book because it makes people understand the life of female in Korea.
>>> I recommend the book because it makes people understand the life of females/ women in Korea.
I agreed with the story of the book because I am same age with Kim Ji Young in the book.
>>> I agree with the story of the book because I am the same age as Kim Ji Young in the book.
And Kim Ji Yiung is the most common [이름]e in that time.
>>> And Kim Ji Young is the most common [이름]e at that time.
So, the book show that female are still not same position with male through the life of female in that time,
>>> So, the book shows that females/ women are still not in the same position as males/ men through the life of a female in that time.
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