homework
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HOMEWORK: Tell about your favorite types of conversations to have?
My favorite conversations are movies and sports and communication.
Most of male like to talk about sports or exercise, and female like to talk about fashion or trend decoration.
These information are just my subjective opinion.
Recently, I found that what i like to talk. that is about book stories.
Because, when i worked in military, We have a break time almost 2 hours a day.
So, That time, I read a books kind of novel or movies.
I like to talk with my friends and family, Glad of conversation makes the bigger delight.
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Most of male like to talk about sports or exercise, and female like to talk about fashion or trend decoration.
Because, when i worked in military, We have a break time almost 2 hours a day.
So, That time, I read a books kind of novel or movies.
I like to talk with my friends and family, Glad of conversation makes the bigger delight.
My favorite conversations are movies and sports and communication.
>>My favorite types conversations are movies, sports and communication.
>>Most men like to talk about sports or exercise, and most women talk about fashion or trend decoration.
These information are just my subjective opinion.
>CORRECT
Recently, I found that what i like to talk. that is about book stories.
>>Recently, I found what I like to talk about. That is about book stories.
Because, when i worked in military, We have a break time almost 2 hours a day.
>>Because, when I worked in the military, we have a break time of 2 hours a day.
So, That time, I read a books kind of novel or movies.
>>So, at that time, I read books and different kinds of novels or movies
I like to talk with my friends and family, Glad of conversation makes the bigger delight.
>>I would like to talk with my friends and family, happy conversations makes me delighted.
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