homework
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I disagree on the idea of government censoring internet.
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>>I contradict on the idea of government censoring internet.
Over the course of history, the public’s right to free expression has been exercised in many different media and forums.
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>>Freedom has been exercised in various forms.
Social media is just the latest platform where people can exchange ideas, debate pressing social and political issues and criticize the government.
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It is a place for the exchange of ideas, a forum for debate on pressing social and political issues, and an outlet for political dissent and government criticism.
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Former Supreme Court of Canada Justice once wrote “The liberty to comment on and criticize existing institutions and structures is an indispensable component of a free and democratic society.
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It is imperative for such societies to benefit from a multiplicity of viewpoints which can find fertile sustenance through various media of communication.”
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Even though they started to censor the internet with reasons for prohibiting illegal websites, we never know if they are infringing on the freedom of expression.
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>>We never know if they are infringing on the freedom of expression even though they started to censor the internet with reasons.
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