Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please answer any of the following questions below:
1. How do you feel about the homophobic laws in Africa?
I don\'t know much about homosexuals.
I think it\'s right to admit homosexuals if they\'re destined.
2. Is your country gay-friendly? Are there laws governing homosexuality in your country?
My country is not friendly to homosexuals. However, there is no law regulating homosexuality.
3. Is it legal in your country for people of the same sex to get married?
Answer the questions below.
In Korea, it is not legal to marry same-sex marriage.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Teacher Lucy
I don\'t know much about homosexuals.
>>CORRECT!
I think it\'s right to admit homosexuals if they\'re destined.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think it\'s time to accept homosexuals if it\'s their destiny.
My country is not friendly to homosexuals.
>>CORRECT!
>>My country is not gay-friendly.
However, there is no law regulating homosexuality.
>>CORRECT!
>>Moreover, there is no law to protect homosexuality.
In Korea, it is not legal to marry same-sex marriage.
>>CORRECT!
>>In Korea, same sex marriage is illegal.
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