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Mrs.Jackson is working in the shop?She is a sale person. When I was a kid , I could play piano. what would you like to drink,the hostess asked me. every body has diffrent ways to learning English. Where did your father go last summer? There is a carpet in the floor. don\'t play music loud, alicia. you can\'t wear make ups in school.I want go to picnic but it depends on my father. They usually travel with bus. He goes to school with foot. I live in wild woods but at the moment I am staying . my friend buys a new computer for me. They are inside. Banks don\'t open in sunday. I showed them the book.
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Mrs.Jackson is working in the shop?She is a sale person.
>>Mrs. Jackson is working in the shop? She is a sales person.
When I was a kid , I could play piano. what would you like to drink,the hostess asked me.
>>When I was a kid , I could play the piano. what would you like to drink,the hostess asked me.
every body has diffrent ways to learning English. Where did your father go last summer?
>>Every body has different ways to learning English. Where did your father go last summer?
There is a carpet in the floor. don\'t play music loud, alicia. you can\'t wear make ups in school.
>>There is a carpet on the floor. Don\'t play music loud, Alicia. you can\'t wear make up in school.
I want go to picnic but it depends on my father.
>>I want go to the picnic but it will depend on my father.
They usually travel with bus. He goes to school with foot. I live in wild woods but at the moment I am staying .
>>They usually travel using a bus. He goes to school on foot. I live in wild woods but at the moment I am staying .
my friend buys a new computer for me. They are inside. Banks don\'t open in sunday. I showed them the book.
>>My friend bought a new computer for me. They are inside. Banks don\'t open on Sunday. I showed them the book.
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