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2019-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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HOMEWORK: What is the funniest advertisement you have seen? Describe it. It was that introduce people and find out their girl friend or boy friend. One of the funniest thing is that the entire male name were same as me. The advertisement was changed every scene and actors also changed. But, There actors have all the same name because my name is very spread in Korea. So many people used my name and I can find the other people who have a same name like me. When i was middle school student, we have a same names in our class, also I found in military friend who used same name like me. It was surprised experience to me, because we had a same name, so if we have same name, i feel more friendly.

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It was that introduce people and find out their girl friend or boy friend.
>>It\'s when people introduce each other and find out their girlfriend or boyfriend.

One of the funniest thing is that the entire male name were same as me.
>>The funniest thing is that the name of that man was the same as [이름]e.

The advertisement was changed every scene and actors also changed.
>>The advertisement was changing every time and the actors also changed.

But, There actors have all the same name because my name is very spread in Korea.
>>But, all of the actors have the same name because my name is very common in Korea.

So many people used my name and I can find the other people who have a same name like me.
>>So many people used my name and I can find the other people who have a same name like [이름]e.

When i was middle school student, we have a same names in our class, also I found in military friend who used same name like me.
>>When I was in middle school, we have same names in our class, I also found a  military friend who used the same name like me.

It was surprised experience to me, because we had a same name, so if we have same name, i feel more friendly.
>>
That experience was very surprising for me, because we have the same name, so if we have same name, I will feel more comfortable. 

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