Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think our soceity is too dependent on technology like smart phone and robot.
It\'s because people develop many type of robot.
So we lose our jobs.
And robots cleaning our house.
This is we are too dependant on technology.
강사 첨삭
Nice idea dear. Do you have a robot at home? Or maybe you have a machine?
>> I think our society is too dependent on technology like smart phones and robots.
It\'s because people develop many type of robot.
>> It\'s because people are developing many types of robots.
So we lose our jobs.
>> Correct.
And robots cleaning our house.
>> And robots are used to clean our houses.
This is we are too dependant on technology.
>> This is why we are too dependent on technology.
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