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2019-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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A certain level of stress can be positive. Can you think of any cases where stress can be useful or even necessary? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences. In my previous company, my team manager was a foreigner from Hongkong. She visited Korea to have a meeting with team menbers once a month. In first, I got stress whenever she visited Korea because I was not good at communicating with her in English. But, after 3 months went by, I was not nervous anymore. In this case, I think that the stress can be positive.

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Hi, Serena. I want to commend you on homework well thought of ^^ I only had to make minor revisions on your essay and I appreciate you following the rules on writing. Thank you for doing an excellent homework. Keep it up. I\'m already looking forward to your next essay. ~ teacher Jane c\",) 


In my previous company, my team manager was a foreigner from Hongkong.
>>> In my previous company, my team manager was a foreigner from Hong Kong.

She visited Korea to have a meeting with team menbers once a month.
>>> She visited Korea to have a meeting with team members once a month.

In first, I got stress whenever she visited Korea because I was not good at communicating with her in English.
>>> At first, I got stressed whenever she visited Korea because I was not good at communicating with her in English.

But, after 3 months went by, I was not nervous anymore.
>>> CORRECT =) 

In this case, I think that the stress can be positive.
>>> In this case, I think that stress can be positive.

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