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I think the fact that i totally adapt to this life makes me happy. When i came here in january, Everyting was new.New people, new work etc. So i spent very hard time to adapt to.So,I was up against a wall.But now, I spent 10months here and i think i\'m doing well. so i can have extra time to study english and do other things that i want. these days. i feel everything i do is going well. it\'s very happy thing. and now i want to last like this until i finish my millitary service. that\'s all i hope here
강사 첨삭
Hello Jay! Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your homework today. You were good in expressing yourself through writing. You also made great sentences today. Just be careful in constructing sentences. Remember to capitalize the first letter of the the first word in a sentence. :)
Until the next one! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>I think the fact that I totally adapt to this life makes me happy.
When i came here in january, Everyting was new.New people, new work etc.
>>When I came here in January, everything was new like new people, new work, and etc.
So i spent very hard time to adapt to.So,I was up against a wall.
>>So, I spent a very hard time to adapt and I felt I was against a wall.
But now, I spent 10months here and i think i\'m doing well.
>>But now, I spent 10 months here and I think I\'m doing well.
OR>>But now, after spending 10 months here, I think I\'m doing well.
so i can have extra time to study english and do other things that i want.
>>So, I can have extra time to study English and do other things that I want.
OR>>So, I have the extra time to study English and do all the things that I want.
these days. i feel everything i do is going well.
>>These days, I feel everything I do is going well.
OR>>These days, I feel everything is going well.
it\'s very happy thing.
>>It\'s a very happy thing.
and now i want to last like this until i finish my millitary service.
>>And now, I want to last like this until I finished my military service.
OR>>And now, I want this to last until I finished my military service.
that\'s all i hope here
>>That\'s all I hope here.
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