Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go 삼육 middle school. And i want to raise a dog. I want tolose my weight 5kg. I want to my meet more friends. I want to rest in my home or i want to play with my friends.
I need study hard and eat food few before.
강사 첨삭
These are really good plans dear.
>> I want to go to 삼육 middle school.
And i want to raise a dog. I want tolose my weight 5kg.
>> And I want to raise a dog. I want to lose 5 kg of my weight.
I want to my meet more friends.
>> I want to meet more friends.
I want to rest in my home or i want to play with my friends.
>> I want to rest at home or I want to play with my friends.
I need study hard and eat food few before.
>> I need to study hard and not eat a lot of food.
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