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HOMEWORK: Have you ever revealed someone\'s secret when you weren\'t supposed to?
No, haven\'t because If someone told me the secret, they will be thought that shared the secret ourselves.
So, I didn\'t talk the secret to anyone Unfortunately, Someone knew the secret, Our relationship will be awkward.
In my case, I don\'t have many secrets because secret is like a bomb So, someday it would be reveal the surface.
When i was high school, we had many secret between our classmate.
I thought that Keeping secret wasn\'t easy, So sharing the secret looks more better.
Too many have secret is not good for me, It is more comfortable tell the true rather hiding.
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So, I didn\'t talk the secret to anyone Unfortunately, Someone knew the secret, Our relationship will be awkward.
In my case, I don\'t have many secrets because secret is like a bomb So, someday it would be reveal the surface.
When i was high school, we had many secret between our classmate.
I thought that Keeping secret wasn\'t easy, So sharing the secret looks more better.
Too many have secret is not good for me, It is more comfortable tell the true rather hiding.
No, haven\'t because If someone told me the secret, they will be thought that shared the secret ourselves.
>>No, I haven\'t, because if someone told me his/her secret, they will think that I shared the secret.
>>So, I didn\'t tell the secret to anyone, unfortunately, if someone knew the secret, our relationship will be awkward.
In my case, I don\'t have many secrets because secret is like a bomb So, someday it would be reveal the surface.
>>In my case, I don\'t have many secrets because having a secret is like a bomb. So, someday it would be revealed sometime.
When i was high school, we had many secret between our classmate.
>>When I was in high school, we had many secrets between my classmates.
I thought that Keeping secret wasn\'t easy, So sharing the secret looks more better.
>>I thought that keeping secrets wasn\'t easy, so sharing secrets is better.
Too many have secret is not good for me, It is more comfortable tell the true rather hiding.
>>Too many secrets is not good for me, I will be more comfortable to tell the truth rather than hiding it.
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