Homework
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If you could trade place with someone\'s house (an actor or a famous person)who and why?
My dream is not so big and I quickly forgive something that cannot be gotten. So I never have thought about trading house with any big and fancy house on TV. But there were some times I thought of house where has small field near house. That\'s why I would like to raise vegetables in there.
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If you could trade place with someone\'s house (an actor or a famous person)who and why?
My dream is not so big and I quickly forgive something that cannot be gotten.
My dream is not so big and I quickly forgive something that cannot be gotten.
>>>My dream is not that big and I quickly give up on something I cannot reach in the future.
OR: I don\'t dream that big and I know when to give up when it\'snot possible for me to have it.
So I never have thought about trading house with any big and fancy house on TV.
>>>So I never thought of trading house with someone famous with their big and fancy house.
But there were some times I thought of house where has small field near house.
>>>But there were sometimes that I want to have a house with a small field where I can plant.
That\'s why I would like to raise vegetables in there.
>>>That\'s the reason why I would like to raise some vegetables in my small field.
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