Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are some bad things about having a computer?
Basically, In Fact I think that The having a computer is more better advantage.
but If I find bad things, it is lost thinking time and experience to do things.
The computer has many information.
So it is useful. but it can\'t experience myself to do something.
It just information of another person, It\'s not mine.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I hope you can experience the best things in life.
Computers are very convenient.
However, we should never forget to live life to the fullest.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Basically, In Fact I think that The having a computer is more better advantage.>> It\'s a fact that having a computer has many advantages.
but If I find bad things, it is lost thinking time and experience to do things.
but If I find bad things, it is lost thinking time and experience to do things.
>> However, if I see bad things online, I feel that I have wasted time that I should have spent experiencing things.
The computer has many information.
The computer has many information.
>> The computer gives us much information.
So it is useful.
So it is useful.
>> It is really useful.
but it can\'t experience myself to do something.
>> However, it could not make us experience everything.
It just information of another person, It\'s not mine.
It just information of another person, It\'s not mine.
>> Other people provide the information, not me.
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