Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please answer any of the following questions below:
1. What do you know about cyber-stalking?
I heard a lot about people who were cyber-stalked on the news.
2. Does your online behavior reflect concern for your own cyber-safety? How much responsibility should service providers accept for the behavior of their customers?
I tend to consider safety a lot when using online.
Customer misbehavior is also a problem, but service providers are half responsible, so I think they should be responsible for more than 50 percent of damages.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Teacher Lucy
I heard a lot about people who were cyber-stalked on the news.
>>CORRECT!
>>I heard on the news about people who were cyber-stalked.
I tend to consider safety a lot when using online.
>>CORRECT!
>>When using online I tend to consider safety.
Customer misbehavior is also a problem, but service providers are half responsible, so I think they should be responsible for more than 50 percent of damages.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think service providers are half responsible so they should be responsible for more than 50% of damages.
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