Homework
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When was the last time you saw a very interesting movie?
The last friday, I watched movie the Jokker. I was sad and I can understand a little about Jokker\'s charcter. But I think that the crime is bad things. And Environment that it is grow up is important in childhood. Because It effect the way of life until adult-ages.
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The last friday, I watched movie the Jokker.
>> I watched the movie, \"Joker\", last Friday.
I was sad and I can understand a little about Jokker\'s charcter.
>> I was moved and I could understand the character of \"Joker\" a little bit.
But I think that the crime is bad things.
>> I still think committing crimes is a bad thing.
And Environment that it is grow up is important in childhood.
>> The environment where a child grows up is important.
Because It effect the way of life until adult-ages.
>> It affects a person\'s way of life from childhood to adulthood.
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