Homework
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If you could be another person for a day, who would you be?
If I can was changed another person, I want to be a President. Because he can change my country\'s policy.
Also Many uncomfortable things can change.
It can show up the city, culture, sports, industry and so on.
The influence and policy is big power that move the world.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I appreciate your efforts in this composition.
There are some terms that need to be changed.
Familiarize yourself with new terms and expressions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I can was changed another person, I want to be a President.
>> If I could be another person, I want to be a president of a country.
Because he can change my country\'s policy.
>> It\'s because he can change the policies in the country.
Also Many uncomfortable things can change.
Also Many uncomfortable things can change.
>> Other ways and things can also change.
It can show up the city, culture, sports, industry and so on.
It can show up the city, culture, sports, industry and so on.
>> This can be seen in the cities, culture, sports, industry and so on.
The influence and policy is big power that move the world.
The influence and policy is big power that move the world.
>> Influence and policies are sources of power that can move the world.
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