homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Last weekend, My wife and I met in Dajeon, And we had a decent weekend. But the thing is, I spent too much money during the weekend.
Fisrt I made my car fixed and got an inspection. Because my car has just runned over than 50,000km, so it need to get checked, and also the right side mirror which is folded and unfolded automatically didn\\\'t work well. So the mechanic changed engine oil, brake oil, filters of air-conditioner(also he cleaned inside the a/c), and give some oil in the mirror. The maintenance was necessary, but too priecy.
Plus we bought some clothes and underwares and food at market. It cost a lot either. Anyway, I don\\\'t regret what I spent last weekend, but I didn\\\'t expect that much expenditure.
So in this weekend, my wife and I will do nothing, just goof around do not go anywhere, and study English all day long. I hope so.
강사 첨삭
Good evening George,
Thank you for taking time to send me this homework.
I totally agree with you that having a car is really high maintenance.
Keep up the good work! You had a lot of good ideas in this. Good job!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie
HOMEWORK:
Last weekend, My wife and I met in Dajeon, And we had a decent weekend.
>>>Last weekend, My wife and I met in Dajeon. We had a decent weekend.
But the thing is, I spent too much money during the weekend.
>>>CORRECT
Fisrt I made my car fixed and got an inspection. Because my car has just runned over than 50,000km, so it need to get checked, and also the right side mirror which is folded and unfolded automatically didn\'t work well.
>>>First, my car needs to be fixed. It needs an inspection because it ran over 50,000 km and the side mirror suddenly didn\'t function well.
So the mechanic changed engine oil, brake oil, filters of air-conditioner(also he cleaned inside the a/c), and give some oil in the mirror.
>>>So the mechanic changed the engine oil, the filters of the air conditioner and cleaned it too. In addition, he also add an oil for the side mirror to function well.
The maintenance was necessary, but too priecy.
>>>The maintenance was necessary, but too pricey.
Plus we bought some clothes and underwares and food at market. It cost a lot either.
>>>Plus we bought some clothes, under wares and food at the market. It all cost a lot either.
Anyway, I don\'t regret what I spent last weekend, but I didn\'t expect that much expenditure.
>>>Anyways, I don\'t regret what I spent last weekend but the thing is; I didn\'t expect that I did really spent that much.
So in this weekend, my wife and I will do nothing, just goof around do not go anywhere, and study English all day long. I hope so.
>>>So this coming weekend, my wife and I will do nothing. We will just goof around and will not go out. We will just study English ll day long. I really hope so.
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