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2019-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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It is not easy to talk to a close-minded person. In my case, I wait for this person until who can think more about a conflict. And then, one more I talk to that person. I try to find rational solution of conflict.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^


This is so true.

But you did a really good job in explaining how you could resolve the conflict.

You are very mature. ^^



~t. Ally



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It is not easy to talk to a close-minded person.

>> CORRECT!


 In my case, I wait for this person until who can think more about a conflict.

>> In my case, I will wait for this person until they are ready to think objectively about the conflict.


 And then, one more I talk to that person.

>> I will then talk to that person.


 I try to find rational solution of conflict.

>> I will try to find a rational solution to the conflict.

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