Homework
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What in your life would you not change?
I will not change In My life about 3 things.
First it is diligent. Diligence most important in my life.
This is because my motto is diligent people is not poor.
The Second is Modesty, I think modesty can be a shield to other people in life. Finally is Passion. The passion is power that can be to do anything. And I believe that hardship can to overcome to passion.
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I will not change In My life about 3 things.
>> There are three things in my life that I won\'t change.
First it is diligent.
First it is diligent.
>> First, it\'s my diligence.
Diligence most important in my life.
>> Diligence is the most important thing in my life.
This is because my motto is diligent people is not poor.
This is because my motto is diligent people is not poor.
>> This is because my motto is \"Diligent people are not poor.\"
The Second is Modesty,
The Second is Modesty,
>> The second is my modesty.
I think modesty can be a shield to other people in life.
>> I think modesty can be a shield against other people in life.
Finally is Passion.
>> Finally, it\'s my passion.
The passion is power that can be to do anything.
>> Passion gives you power to do anything.
And I believe that hardship can to overcome to passion.
>> I believe that hardship can never defeat passion.
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