Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What time of year is the best weather where you live?
The Korea has 4 weathers. It is spring, summer, fall, winter. The 4 climates has each others features. I favorite wheather is spring and fall. It is not too hot and too cold. The spring that warm makes me happy. Besides This cool weather\'s fall makes me good feelings.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You have to know the difference between season and weather.
The weather changes every day but seasons stay for a longer period of time.
This is for your future reference.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The Korea has 4 weathers.
>> There are four seasons in Korea.
It is spring, summer, fall, winter.
>> It is spring, summer, fall, winter.
The 4 climates has each others features.
>> Each season has its own advantages.
I favorite wheather is spring and fall.
> My favorite seasons are spring and fall.
It is not too hot and too cold.
>> Correct
The spring that warm makes me happy.
>> It\'s warm in spring and it makes me happy.
Besides This cool weather\'s fall makes me good feelings.
>> The cool weather in fall brings out good feelings.
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