Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: What positive effects does your work have on your life? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Although I quit my job a few month ago, I think my work is needed in my life.
Working make me feel achivement, self confidence and self respectancy.
Besides, I can have social relation ship and financial benefit.
So, I am finding new job. Frankling speaking, getting a new job is not so simple.
At first, I am thinking what I want to do in the future, when I am happy...
And I am trying to do new things I am interested.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Serena. Thank you for expressing your thoughts through writing. I really appreciate it. Keep it up and I look forward to reading more of your work. Have a good one and I\'ll see you again on Friday. ~ teacher Jane ^___^
Although I quit my job a few month ago, I think my work is needed in my life.
>>> Although I quit my job a few months ago, I think my work is needed/ necessary in my life.
Working make me feel achivement, self confidence and self respectancy.
>>> Working gives me a sense of achievement, self-confidence, and self-respect.
Besides, I can have social relation ship and financial benefit.
>>> Besides, I can have social relations and financial benefits.
So, I am finding new job.
>>> So I\'m looking for a new job.
Frankling speaking, getting a new job is not so simple.
>>> Frankly speaking, getting a new job is not so simple.
At first, I am thinking what I want to do in the future, when I am happy...
>>> At first, I was thinking about what I wanted to do in the future, about what would make me happy.
And I am trying to do new things I am interested.
>>> And I am trying to do new things I am interested in.
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