Homework
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I don\'t agree that friendship is the most important thing in relationship. Friendship is just one of the important things. There are some more important things in relationship. For exmaple, There would be personality,preference,money ,etc. I think these kinds of things effect complicately to get a good relationship. And I think it is impossbile for people to realize what is working for relationship. It\'s very complicating thing. So, maybe I couldn\'t keep in good relationship with somebody only for friendship.
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Hello there Jay! I appreciate that you are transparently stating your opinions in your homework. I am learning something from you as well. Thank you. Keep it up! ^-^
~Until the next one! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>I don\'t agree that friendship is the most important thing in a relationship.
Friendship is just one of the important things.
>>Friendship is just of the many important things.
There are some more important things in relationship.
>>There are some things that are more important in a relationship.
For exmaple, There would be personality,preference,money ,etc.
>>For example, there would be personalities, preferences, money, and etc.
I think these kinds of things effect complicately to get a good relationship.
>>I think these kinds of things will greatly affect to get a good relationship.
OR>>I think these kinds of things greatly affect in having a good relationship.
And I think it is impossbile for people to realize what is working for relationship.
>>And, I think it is impossible for people to realize how to work a relationship.
It\'s very complicating thing.
>>It\'s a very complicated thing.
So, maybe I couldn\'t keep in good relationship with somebody only for friendship.
>>So, maybe I couldn\'t keep in a good relationship with somebody only because of friendship.
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