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You told me that you attended the wedding of your friend\'s daughter, in three to five sentences, could you describe the wedding
The wedding of my friend\'s daughter was held without a officiant. The friends of bride and groom read the letters that they wrote each about the couple, and sang a congratulatory song. And then fathers of both families gave the couple a congratulatory message.
In past, we couldn\'t think of having a wedding without officiant. In these days, I think lots of event are not tied to the formality. The other words, the youngs are free from a formality.
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Hello Bella ,
Happy Thursday, hope you\'re doing great.
Again,thank you for taking time to answer this question.
Keep improving for you to be fluent. Let\'s hope for that. You can do it!
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Teacher Annie
You told me that you attended the wedding of your friend\'s daughter, in three to five sentences, could you describe the wedding
The wedding of my friend\'s daughter was held without a officiant.
The wedding of my friend\'s daughter was held without a officiant.
>>> The wedding of my friend\'s daughter was held without an officiant.
The friends of bride and groom read the letters that they wrote each about the couple, and sang a congratulatory song.
>>>The friends of the bride and groom read the letter they wrote for the couple.
They also sang a congratulatory songs to the newly weds.
And then fathers of both families gave the couple a congratulatory message.
>>>Then the father of the both parties will gave the couple a congratulatory message and advises.
In past, we couldn\'t think of having a wedding without officiant.
>>>In past, we couldn\'t think of having a wedding without an officiant.
In these days, I think lots of event are not tied to the formality.
>>>In these days, I think lots of event are not tied to formality.
OR: These days, I think a lot of events are no longer tied to formalities.
The other words, the youngs are free from a formality.
>>>In other words, the new generation is already free from formalities.
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