Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you subscribe to Netflix? If so, how often do you see Netflix films?
I did subscribe to Netflix. And I often see the game of Throne in Netflix. Usually I see about 3 in week. I use that on my way work in the morning.The Netflix has many drama contents, So It is very useful and interesting and fun^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I love \"Game of Thrones\"
Let\'s talk about it more in class.
I\'m sure you have a lot of ideas about it.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I did subscribe to Netflix.
>> I do subscribe to Netflix.
And I often see the game of Throne in Netflix.
>> I often watch \"Game of Thrones\" on it.
Usually I see about 3 in week.
>> I usually watch Netflix three times a week.
I use that on my way work in the morning.
>> I watch it on my way to work every morning.
The Netflix has many drama contents,
>> Netflix features a lot of series.
So It is very useful and interesting and fun^^
>> That\'s why I think it\'s useful, interesting and fun.
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