homework
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HOMEWORK: Do you think it is okay to marry someone with a different religion?
Yes, i\'m okay, because so many people believed the other religion.
So, I have to respect them, and It is not important me what she believe kind of religion.
Most important thing is heart and [이름]d, so I don\'t care about it.
Some of people forced to people that been believed their religion.
I think that this way is wrong, people have their right, we have to just respect them.
It is not bad thing, if i don\'t have religion, believing each other who is wife and husband is important when they married.
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Yes, i\'m okay,because so many people believed the other religion.
So, I have to respect them, and It is not important me what she believe kind of religion.
Some of people forced to people that been believed their religion.
I think that this way is wrong, people have their right, we have to just respect them.
It is not bad thing, if i don\'t have religion, believing each other who is wife and husband is important when they married.
Yes, i\'m okay,because so many people believed the other religion.
>>Yes, i\'m okay with it, many people believe in the other religion as well.
>>So, I have to respect them, and her religion is not that important for me.
Most important thing is heart and [이름]d, so I don\'t care about it.
>>The most important thing is the heart and the [이름]d, so I don\'t care about it.
Some of people forced to people that been believed their religion.
>>Some people are forcing other people to believe in their religion.
I think that this way is wrong, people have their right, we have to just respect them.
>>CORRECT
It is not bad thing, if i don\'t have religion, believing each other who is wife and husband is important when they married.
>>It is not a bad thing if I don\'t have any religion. believing your wife/husband is more important when they get married.
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