Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms.. Cecelia!
~Teacher Lucy
In Korea, job opportunities are equal.
>>CORRECT!
>>Job opportunities are equal in Korea.
However, some people use their authority to get their children to work.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s hard to get a job because there are more people with high educational background.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s hard to get a job because there are people who are more globally competent.
Also, finding a job is more difficult because they don\'t want to work physically.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t think South Korea\'s pay is small compared to its neighbor.
>>CORRECT!
>>I don\'t think South Korea\'s pay is small compared to its neighbors.
Job seekers prefer large companies because they are paid more by large companies than small and medium-sized companies.
>>Job seekers prefer large companies because they are more paid by larger companies than smaller and medium-sized companies.
Doctors and lawyers used to be highly paid, but not necessarily now.
>>CORRECT!
Celebrities seem to be paid the most these days.
>>CORRECT!
>>These days, celebrities seem to be the most paid.
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