Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree to the topic. It\'s very important for me to become a good person.There is a korean saying \'Don\'t go to the crow\'. It means that people are usually freindly to similar people. So, I have to become a nice person to hang out with nice friends. To become a good friend,
I thinhk i have to be considerate of others. If i do that, They will also care of me. If they don\'t do that, I can filter them out. They would be very mushyheaded people.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Jay! Good job in your homework. You only committed minor lapses like spelling and capitalization of pronouns like \"I\". You were able to deliver your message clearly in your homework today. Good job Jay!
~Until the next one! :)
See you on Monday! ^-^
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>I agree to this topic.
It\'s very important for me to become a good person.
>>CORRECT
There is a korean saying \'Don\'t go to the crow\'.
>>There is a Korean saying \"Don\'t go to the crow\".
It means that people are usually freindly to similar people.
>>It means that people are usually friendly to similar people.
So, I have to become a nice person to hang out with nice friends.
>>CORRECT
To become a good friend, I thinhk i have to be considerate of others.
>>To become a good friend, I think, I have to be considerate of others.
OR>>To become a good friend, I think, I have to consider others.
If i do that, They will also care of me.
>>If I do that, they will also care for me.
OR>>If I do that, they will also comfort me.
If they don\'t do that, I can filter them out.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If they can\'t do that, I can leave them out.
They would be very mushyheaded people.
>>They would be very mushy headed people.
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