homework
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HOMEWORK: In your country do single people of opposite gender ever live together as roommates, not as boyfriend or girlfriend?
Actually, we lived in other room between male and female.
In my case, I lived in dormitory to use 4 people together, All of them were male.
My university had been dived the other place who lived there, So male used left building and female used right building.
However, I heard about some information, Some of other country lived together who is male and female.
I think that It looks fine, because if they lived together that they can talk lot of times between them.
We need to break the block of gender because of existed male and female in earth.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
>>Actually, men and women live in different rooms.
In my case, I lived in dormitory to use 4 people together, All of them were male.
>>In my case, I lived in a dormitory with 4 people living together, all of them were male.
My university had been dived the other place who lived there, So male used left building and female used right building.
>>My university divided other places, so men uses the left building and women uses right building.
However, I heard about some information, Some of other country lived together who is male and female.
>>However, I heard about some information, there are some countries, where men and women live together.
I think that it looks fine, because if they lived together that they can talk lot of times between them.
>>I think that it looks fine, because if they live together, that they can have more conversations.
We need to break the block of gender because of existed male and female in earth.
>>We need to break the gender discri[이름]ation, because both men and women exists in this earth.
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